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Tuesday, August 15, 2017

Christmas

One morning I woke up with a shock it was Christmas and my tummy was full of excitement and next door this stranger was watching me he was being creepy he was like 76 or something I opened my presents the old man came outside to put rubbish out then he got some wood then went back inside opened more presents then he stared at me I closed my blinds then I heard a knock then I opened the door the stranger was right there I closed the door then said the stranger then I went to my room then I went to play on my iPhone then I heard a loud bang it sounded like thunder then I charged down my dad went and got the door I was behind him it was a guest then we came and sat down I was at dad’s house then I went to the kitchen grabbed the candy canes then offered it to the guest then she accepted it so we sat down then I opened the blinds then it stopped snowing so I went outside then I went to the store to buy some more Christmas decorations and when I was at the store I found some Christmas socks they were softer than a cloud so I bought them they were 7$ I drove back to my house then I was opening the rest of my present I saw the stranger staring at me again then I said to dad the stranger is staring at me dad was saying dont be silly so went on my phone and then I saw my phone only had 5% i chucked it on charge I went down stairs then I said where is dad and the guest then I saw the stranger with my dad i ran as fast as i could and then the guest tried to save dad I went into the man's house his dog chased me around the lawn i punched the dog and. then.. Did you know Toxic Newts are poisonous if you eat them?


Toxic Newts

Toxic newts live in tide pools and rain forest they are located in costa rica and they are really hard to find and they a really fast? And they can also be toxic they produce poison and they can leap  higher than a frog and they cannot be eaten because if someone eats the toxic newt poison and toxic goes into what ate it and they toxic newt is a predator it eats bugs seaweed and it can eat each other.

P2 how toxic newts defend themselves against predators the new puts its head up it gives a warning to its predators and if a predator ignores the warning it can die

P3 habitat newts live in water or in burrows and they come out in the evening at 1:30 they know when they are in trouble


P4 how they hide they camo into dirt rocks and water and

This is a newt

Image result for toxic newtsdid you know newts can be very slippery    Newts can only be slippery when they go in water and come out of water they can do much more than that  they can make good pets but they can bite their bite can cause a bad sting for about 6 days and newts feed on seaweed and fish and also bugs newts like to hide all day they come out most the night sometimes they don't hide and come out  


https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1UMU3HaK56bCEEwoLNaCoPU8Jvx8BkJy4bivjkIA6BD8/edit

11 comments:

  1. Hello Riley my name is Aryan and i am from Sock burn School i really like your Imaginary Danger writing and you have worked really well on your writing. Nice work!

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  2. Hi Riley, Wow, you have written such a long story! I love that you have used a simile and a lot of descriptive language. I noticed that there are no full-stops in your story so I ran out of breath reading it in one long sentence! Perhaps you could read through your story again and add in full-stops.

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  3. Talofa Riley,
    I really enjoyed reading your story, the way you describe the creepy man painted a really cool picture in my head. I enjoyed the way you used a simile to explain the bang on the door was awesome. Did you get Google Read Write to read this back to you to make sure you had you full stops in the right place? If not that would help you with your writing?

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  4. hi riley i loved reading your story it made a painting in my mind but i didn't see any full stops but next time a seconded good story and full stops and what happened at the end what did you punch?.

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  5. Kia Ora Riley,

    My name is Hazel, and I will be one of the people blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning Journey.

    I enjoyed reading your facts about newts and also your creative writing story about Christmas. I can't believe that it will be Christmas Day on Monday; that is so soon! I am very excited for Christmas because it means that I get to spend lots of time with my family. What are your plans for Christmas?

    We are very excited that you've registered for the Summer Learning Journey with us. I know it can sometimes be tricky to get started. I have included a link to the week one activities, but remember, you can do them in any order! Check out the activities on our website, and then post your responses to the activities here on your blog site.

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/week-one

    I am so excited to read all of your posts!

    Cheers,

    Hazel :)

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  6. Hi Riley it's Kaleb. I like your story and how you put so much detail.It reminds me of freak show.

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  7. I like how you pot theat newt on the video����

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  8. i love how much pashints you have to do alot of the story and it was all great i loved all of it

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  9. i love how much pashints you have to do alot of the story and it was all great i loved all of it

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  10. Hi Riley I really like your post. This reminded me of a lizard and it is
    A reptile I learnt things that I didn’t know. Next time, you could put in a video or a bigger pic bye.

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